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In His Arms
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In His Arms |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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In his arms she no longer yearned to fly she was already there [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-09-2004 12:41 PM).] |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I like this...but after reading over a 1000 short poems in 2003 I can say you need more here...something more to set it apart. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - I wonder how this would be... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this is so true, when a person is in the right arms..... the arms of one who loves her and and who she loves too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I think you style sets you apart. Guess some people are clueless. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes darling and thats cause you know who it was written for |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is wonderful. To say so much, with so little. That is a hard thing to do. I have not read many short poems. The poems I tend to read are very long, and most very drawn out, people are wrapped up in rhyme. I'm not saying that's bad, I'm saying it is refreshing that we can still say so much, with so little. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sweet |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh Yes !! hugs, Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the brevity in this is absolute perfection! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I think you say it all..and well. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful Michele..darn what I wouldn't give for some warm arms today  hugs M |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Perfect! I wish I had thought to write this. This is perfect. I said that twice. I meant it both times. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh my...this took my breath away! Beautiful Michelle. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for much for reading, it is tricky to condense into a few words, i tend to pour at times too much, but this seemed to say what i needed to say, thanks again |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
How nice to find one's calming. I love this very simple write...it paints a very extensive picture. Great words. McLean |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again glad you could see within the brevity of this |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Oh BUT yes! I feel that way with each embrace,,,,,,so wonderful michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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