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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-08 03:48 PM


I face you
On a bad day
On the green
Wind crescendo

I sit before you
Have the time
Await the wind
The cleansing rhyme

No one in this life knows
Your innermost thoughts
You are to them
A game

You bring strength
You bring the past
You tell of the future
You give peace at last


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wintertao
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1 posted 2004-01-08 03:52 PM


sweet,
aye tis a subtle gem from your pen.

huzzzaaahhhhhhh!

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2 posted 2004-01-08 03:59 PM


Dave~
I like this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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3 posted 2004-01-09 01:39 AM


i won't bore you with why this poem spoke and touches on my life at this moment.. but i will say that it is one that i wish i had been able to write ...

i'm glad i read you tonight.


snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-09 02:58 AM


Dave -- I really liked this one, as well!
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5 posted 2004-01-09 05:13 AM


peace at the end of chaos
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6 posted 2004-01-09 05:34 AM


very interesting I like it
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7 posted 2004-01-09 06:13 AM


Dave,

   This works well with the rest.  I liked.

No one in this life knows
Your innermost thoughts
You are to them
A game

DavePage
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8 posted 2004-01-09 06:41 PM


Thanks for the words.
It is a poem I still feel I need to balance but the peace to just do nothing means a lot at times whilst adversity whips around the peace.

Dave

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