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Horizon Line - Triolet, but not expanded
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Horizon Line - Triolet, but not expanded |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Across the starlight I am waiting where horizon meets the sea all your love, anticipating across the starlight I am waiting all my interest you were sating till you left to set me free across the starlight I am waiting where horizon meets the sea Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ It is melodically beautemous~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is beautiful Kethry, it should be put to musick. maggie |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Agreed...very well done. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
masterful. beautiful. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, this is very beautiful. I love this form of poetry. Don't you? It always has such a pretty ring to it.  Hugs Ethel |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beloved one whether it’s the economy of your writing or the fact you show such a wealth of talent I don’t know, I do know this is exquisite and of course its perfect you wrote it. I love it as always as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Bravo, Keth...a perfect triolet. Why am I not surprised?  *clap* *clap* *clap* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
very pretty! This leaves me with a sense of waiting. Sadie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Across the starlight I am waiting If that was the only line, I'd love it. *S* This is beautiful, Kethry... well done! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - your words say a lot... BC |
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