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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-01-08 11:31 AM


You reach me naked
Untruths become assumptions disciple
Lower light is thrown upward
Meditation becomes sun spiritual
Awakened and aroused
Lusting deliberation we fly
In unison your soul seeks mine
Somewhere among the unworldly
Why doth these blends beat?
Where are you?
Has our human shadow responded?
Will we find the voice to macrocosmics?
Where we two will weep amid the solar plexus
He who hesitates to regard him
Looses his soul to torture
I have been meditating~
Enabling unison with your soul
Will you find me
Will you know me
Will you hear my visions, imaginative creations?
The reality that burns vital at the base of our spine
Where we meet on a land that is neither wet nor dry
Will you call my identity
Will we form the proper path
Your form swells and grows
Where we two are absorbed
Within the lasting beauty of the heart
Where lips give elixir to lasting wetness of life
A oneness which reasoning cannot find
For you and the true treasure
My beloved binding all of time
Willing where bodies become apparitions
Where springtime drowns in the sea
Taking us with it, like musk magnetizing passion
Into the ear of a skeptic
Where confusing allusion becomes all known secrets
We spread five senses with eloquent understanding
Love wills the shape of things, wine of the body
Drinking culture, we make music by day and night
You are immortal loveā€¦..
You are life

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1 posted 2004-01-08 01:17 PM


Woah woah woah...
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-01-08 04:09 PM


Lee~
I emphatically LIKE this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Goodknight
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3 posted 2004-01-08 09:27 PM


I love the way you make me think - thinking is why I am so your poetry nearly becomes a part of me - loved it - paul
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