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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-01-08 08:41 AM






Their glow, glorious
Soul lights slipping each a sigh
Sun streams moon a kiss
Wolf has found his loving mate
January tenderness


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-08 08:46 AM


Sunshine
A sweet message.

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2 posted 2004-01-08 08:54 AM


Great word choice in "Sun streams Moon a kiss". Wonderful photography as well.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-01-08 09:05 AM


Ahhh....I was hoping there would be another this morning...
and I wasn't disappointed!
Great write lovely lady.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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4 posted 2004-01-08 09:21 AM


"Sun streams moon a kiss" I loved that line. Most enjoyable to read!


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5 posted 2004-01-08 10:18 AM


nice
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6 posted 2004-01-08 10:32 AM


Karilea~
Such a lovely, lovely Senryu~
GORGEOUS MOON PHOTO !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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7 posted 2004-01-08 11:32 AM


Karilea...a tender view!  
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8 posted 2004-01-08 11:36 AM


they say a full moon, everyone goes a little crazy...well I've been watching this Jan. full moon rising and it is all that you describe and more...Sunshine...life is so electric and all penetrating...and the gravitational pull alures...magestic is this universe in all of it's amazing secrets...

I love your writes...and the new picture.
Have a great day!

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9 posted 2004-01-08 12:01 PM


Jan- can be tender, thanks for reminding me.....
hugsss

Lauren~

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This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

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10 posted 2004-01-08 01:01 PM


stunningly gorgeous!
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11 posted 2004-01-08 01:06 PM


I saw the moon last night, in all its fullness, and in reading your poem today, I recall that sight, and the warmth it brought despite the chilly air.  Very, very good!

McLean

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12 posted 2004-01-08 01:13 PM


Here, January is the coldest of the months. The moon does look so beautiful when it's freezing outside, doesn't it? Beautiful, Sun, I love this month.
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13 posted 2004-01-08 03:00 PM


Now that was short, sweet and totally breathtaking!
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14 posted 2004-01-09 10:28 AM


Kari darling sister of my heart, this is awesome in its simplicity, and stunningly beautiful. I’m so rarely in the forums these days, or if I am, I’m in and out again very quickly. Still I had to stop by and read and reply to your wonderful poem, as always its excellent darling heart, I love it utterly, utterly, utterly.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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15 posted 2004-01-09 10:49 AM


Very beautiful...the poem and the picture.
Thanks for sharing with us, Karilea. Heart:
Hugs  
Ethel

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16 posted 2004-01-09 11:33 AM


In the still cold of the night the howl of the wolf would carry and touch the soul of man.  Much as this write reaches out.

believe in what your heart feels...

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