Jazna Leaning There (repost)

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2004-01-08 04:13 AM

This is a poem about a beautiful girl that died of cancer........Used to go boating with her. First love the strong one!

The rain on the cabin windows
drifts like rinse waves in a car wash.
My fingers searching minor sevenths,
my ardent gaze the portside rail,
to see Jazna leaning there.

The summer's marbled skies spread wide
our trolling laughter buffed with spray,
her listing form against the rail.
I tune to open G where all
blues and heartaches follow when.

From sacred space her spirit falls,
a surreal vision cosmos sent.
Devolved from humid heavy mist
her blue-eyed radiance beams
in quandom pose leaning there.

With sudden suck of breath to heart,
my ebbing guitar descants play
to searing pains of her demise.
I cry out with odes and tears
to see Jazna leaning there

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2004-01-08 05:16 AM

Oh Eric, this is powerful in it's rendition. It must have been an awesome memory.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-01-08 05:42 AM

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-01-08 09:31 AM

such a soulful write.....heart hugs in understanding the pain....

Lauren~

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-01-08 09:35 AM

ethome
A touching piece and a haunting read.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2004-01-08 09:38 AM

yes..touching and well done...

that it si for someone such as you describe..makes it indeed heartfelt.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-01-08 11:34 AM

ETHome~
You already know that I love your Jazna pieces .... this is as stunning as ever~
Thank you for sharing her memory again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-01-08 11:52 AM

It's not always easy sharing things
so very personal.

Thank you, Ethome.

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