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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2004-01-07 02:45 PM

Moon beams quiver,
and shadows slither..
my dreams are hellish
        at best.

Sleep of peace..
     for others at rest.

While I fight the demons
       of past...

You'll not let them
       breathe their last.

Time drips in the absence
        void of all light,
what happened before
        won't die in the night,
when fed with the fury
        you feed the dark flame,
I'm lost...incinerated
        destroyed by the blame.

WhiteRose 01/07/04

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-01-07 02:58 PM

Time drips in the absence
        void of all light,
what happened before
        won't die in the night,

Oh so true Rose....sometimes no matter how much we wish for things to fade, they dont. But I have always found that sooner or later the sun does shine.  May your days be bright!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2004-01-07 03:00 PM

Anne,

I understand...and really enjoyed the way you wrote it.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-01-07 04:09 PM

that which won't let up on us, you've written of it well

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-01-07 04:19 PM

WhiteRose,
Well done enjoyed the read.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-07 04:22 PM

fascinating use of language, this unfolds magnificently

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2004-01-07 04:26 PM

Anne, I've missed your writing so much.
This line is amazing.......

Time drips in the absence
void of all light,

I love that line.

Hugs

Ethel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-01-07 04:30 PM

enjoyed

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-01-07 05:39 PM

WhiteRose~
I LOVE this line -

'Time drips in the absence
void of all light'

Good to see you poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-01-07 06:11 PM

Powerful write.
.. and I love the title too.
Love, Margherita

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2004-01-07 07:19 PM

Anne, good to see you again...and a most
powerful write...thank you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2004-01-07 07:44 PM

The burden of blame burns out of control for sure!

This is stark and painfully honest
...excellent poem good poetess.

Nice to read your words here again~
Take good care WhiteRose~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

12 posted 2004-01-07 08:31 PM

really enjoyed the "feel" you conveyed in your words, and the words themselves were wonderful.

jwesley

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