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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-07 02:16 PM


Duty drove the words of the wind which was a chorus changing as each sang it.

On a mountain side I sing
To the trees I would bring
Wind to drift their gentle boughs
To wave for me
In my lonely tower
That pities the wind that freezes the soul
That consumes us naked and whole

Looking far into my life
Stark staring wind is my knife
Plunging into my heart break
Wind my friend
I am yours to take

I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go



I raise my eyes to your shadow
The sun threads between your thoughts
I let the grey enveloped me
I have no reply
I watch the trees wave
To give you, your servant dear
I watch the darkness in the valley
Move to the cherished symbol there
All you hold so dear
And I will shortly join you
Facing my own fear

I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go



They look aloft and never see below
Unless it pleases them
They are the lofty folk
The world dreams of them
I wait here with the rest
Knowing I will die
They will die magnificently
I bye and bye

People will remember them
For their sacrifice
The towers burnt in flames of smoke
Their bodies billowing high
I will die with these men
Who will curse as they kill
That they who want their loved ones
Should be fodder for the mill

We will die for ignorance
And I will die
Without my dying words heard
My death matters least now
Mindless killing while I watch matters
Soulless killing destroys the killers and killed
Knowing we are the foot
Means a lot to us
Dying as the foot
Means we go inch by inch

I will call to the wind that makes a mountain fair
I will see my thoughts echo
I see you standing there
Storms above challenge my regard
Dancing on my soul
Raining through the shard
I call to the wind
Explosive as it flows
Carry my wish
As far as you can go


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1 posted 2004-01-07 02:28 PM


Dave,
An excellent write, to be reread every once in a while.

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2 posted 2004-01-07 02:29 PM


David, once in a while you read something which carries you off into the spiritual...and this was outstanding...well done and should be read by the entire world...beautiful!
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3 posted 2004-01-07 02:35 PM


Very captivating and very emotional. I loved this piece, reread it twice before I even responded, just amazing.
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4 posted 2004-01-18 04:48 PM


I know this was a long one but thanks for taking the time to read it

Only poem I have ever written with a chorus

Dave

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