Open Poetry #30 |
The Wine of Essence |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The Wine of Essence The essence of your wine pervades A mountain stream in full cascade Filling spaces of my mind I did not know and could not find It arrows into my desire Upon a view of grand admire Overwhelms my mind of think With open eyes that cannot blink It ties me with a magic rope Braded with the hemp of hope Sets a seal upon my heart Forever is the marks impart Sings a subtle lullaby Floating like a butterfly Setting on my flowers power Every minute of the hour Alas my head does spin and wheel With the essence of the feel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now these are the sigh poems I look for... Good morning m'friend! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The essence of your wine pervades A mountain stream in full cascade" My my Sy..what a lovely image this conjures up in my mind. Another wonderful write from you this frosty morn. Well done poet sir. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
gives the reader a form of insight into a very positive outlook on love....and the real meanings/purpose imbedded deeply within the spiritual...a real feel good poem my friend...thank you for sharing. Luv Lee J |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
An intoxicating read. *S* Excellent work, my friend. *S* |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Seymour...love the poem. But then you do these oh so well. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you are the sunshine I look for. Nancy, You are the butter on my toast. Now lets have some tea. LeeJ Morning sweet and I thank you with a suthern Good play on subject matter, EvocativeVerse2 Love your comments. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sigh...wonderful.... Good morning Sey! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Thank you and good morning sweet. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As always...beautifuly lyrical. Eric |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This is just lovely, and you are quite the connoisseur... ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oooooooyeah...kinda kinky |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
A mountain stream in full cascade Filling spaces of my mind So vivid. Thank you, again, for sharing your talent. Sadie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I've just got to find a cork-popping dude for your versed-celebrations~ Such a melodic flow ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sy, as always perfect! the lady you write these beautiful poems for is so lucky but then again...seems so are you wonderful! Hugs, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"It ties me with a magic rope Braded with the hemp of hope" Beauuuuuuutiful and awesome writing, Sey. You never cease to amaze me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Let me know when you do. LOL Amy, Thank you dear you are a sweetheart. iliana Your pleasure is my pleasure. LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sings a subtle lullaby Floating like a butterfly Setting on my flowers power Every minute of the hour Seymour, this is so pretty. I really do like it. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel And you are my nector. |
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