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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-01-07 07:22 AM


Busy movements, our world’s logic works
Morning’s wing through every crevice winking gestures
Transfixing in depth, walking through the eyes of basics
Sometimes intentional, sometimes by mere reflex
Sometimes….blurred, in plumb spaces of oceans curtseying
Like a handsome pretence, charming weather flutters about
Into the hearts of early morning, under her sheltering shawl
Of crystal blue winged seas, mutually we talked and talked and talked
With utmost openness, bubbling desires began to unlock

Arcs of penmanship, tossing fonts, glowing like a new moon
Ribbons of miasma, settling outside our curious windows
Whispering secrets to each other, all snug with the growth of afternoon
It was a familiar delicious tingle of contentment; we flew within affluence
Developing interests, swooning overflowing currency of watercolors
You “had” my attention, pointing out that Grande Piano of Virginia`
We were travelers together dining on God’s mind…a soft and lovely starry mantra
You were not a common site, but a deep refection of immense wings which soared
Above the rulers of humanity, but you were gone through a forest

Now I dimly register evenings and its promises, in reminiscence,
Proverbial watercourse communes an ambiguous journals balance
You found a new spot within your crowned feminine seaway
With a slow beat, I sank to my knees, counting the welts of wordplay

But…as in life, for awhile the air reached it‘s peak of color…of that I’ll never regret~

Twilight rose is purpose, interpretations of a profound spiritual rosette~birth~

All illuminations within a vast persuasive sea had fallen to gold
Where our eyes met evenly, our expressions seemed to creatively unfold`

Now I skip delicately barefoot, extraordinarily primed across the sands
Expressionless, from that wind's lovely golden band, and your eccentric musing hands!

The look of illustrations serves me perfectly, from a flaming spiral stairway
With eagerness to build a bridge, no longer arguing any premise

Following life to the ridge of an artful map, fervent and unafraid~

Wide intervals stand, by my side, in a ringed pastureland of golden braids

Yes, oh yes, love, I stumbled, but…as in every end, new beginnings flute embracing enthusiasm

Nothing but free verse lay ahead, and because of you… I compose again and again...

The power of creation within hopeful poems
Fully human and pushing out, sloughing, emerging, continually transcending

God this life is ultimately grand!

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-01-07 07:40 AM


"But…as in life, for awhile the air reached it‘s peak of color…of that I’ll never regret~"

this line really got me
another keeper for my library
thank you, Lee, for delightful imagery and another stimulating write

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2004-01-07 09:09 AM


“God this life is ultimately grand!”

And truly amazing is your poem, that leads you to this wonderful conclusion.
Thank you for sharing your art!
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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3 posted 2004-01-07 02:04 PM


I've printed this out.

I really need to sit down and spend time with it before I say anything.

Dave

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-01-07 02:21 PM


LeeJ
The fervor of the right is within the light.
And you are well tanned.

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