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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-01-07 07:08 AM



Morning Moon

Mists hiding a face
Still the howl is all but there
Footprints in the snow

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2004-01-07 07:17 AM


nicely penned, Karilea...

regards to you,
Sudhir

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2 posted 2004-01-07 07:25 AM


Oh Sunshine...good morning...every picture you post is more beautiful then the other...and the same goes for your writing...a very uplifting write...hope, always hope sails our land...by leaving those footprints along side of ours in the sand.  Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day
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3 posted 2004-01-07 08:40 AM


Bull's eye for you...beautiful stuff.

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4 posted 2004-01-07 09:00 AM


Beautiful follow-up to last night's post..
I love this!
Good morning Sunshine!

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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5 posted 2004-01-07 09:10 AM


short and lovely.
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6 posted 2004-01-07 09:42 AM


Beautiful scenery you created!
I can see it and FEEL it.
Love, Margherita

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7 posted 2004-01-07 09:58 AM


Karilea~
Nice ... nice ... nice~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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8 posted 2004-01-07 03:47 PM


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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9 posted 2004-01-07 04:07 PM


beautifully haunting Karilea

Can't wait for the next one if htere is a next one, hoping there is a next one  shurrup Maree!

hugs you

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10 posted 2004-01-07 04:31 PM


enjoyed this
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11 posted 2004-01-07 05:57 PM


the moon this morning here was peeking through gray clouds, and a mist of winter, these words reflect that....beautiful


~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

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