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The forgotten/Stolen
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The forgotten/Stolen |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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The forgotten Wonder where you will be when you will foget me Wonder what you will do Or if you even knew I couldn't ever be all that you want of me because waiting for you can't be all that I do Stolen Today the memories repressed harbor uneasy in my soul. And all the tides surrounding me wash away the land I stand on. And you watch me float far away As I struggle to find my land Juju---- |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Juju, even though this was sad, it was also beautiful.  Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
All too common feelings written in a very unique way. I especially liked "Stolen." |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou............. Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...the stolen one reminded me of the recent night when someone broke into my car and stole my library card, my Safeway card, my backpack, two or three poems I had recently written, my mail box key and who knows what else...probably a local ice freak...hope they enjoy the poems...I miss them...James |
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