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Goodknight
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0 posted 2004-01-06 07:05 PM


Now that the holidays are over I thought I would post my schizo poetry on Christmas...

Christmas 1
Holiday thrills give me the chills
Far and away feelings must stay
Lights a plenty energy abused
Trees stacked and lonely snow covers all
Thoughts going back to the nice fall
Shopping frenzy slakes capitalisms thirst
Liberal idealists bubbles burst
Frozen ground depressing sounds
Reindeer leavings all around
What do we owe this time of cheer
Solstice celebrations we fear

Christmas 2
Season’s greeting love is meeting
Stories and songs
Celebrate the winter sun
Playing snow is so much fun
Families gather giving gifts
Love and peace too often ifs
Many cultures
Many faiths
Celebrate the winter sun
Seeking joys and lots of fun
Enjoying seasons of the sun
So gather we around in love
Some thinking thoughts above
Many feeling closer still
Now happiest times will be our fill
Open hearts and minds in glee
Darkened thoughts and pains should flee
Timeless lights surround the night
Making many spirits bright


© Copyright 2004 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-01-06 08:56 PM


Hi Paul...I'm liking your second scene...I have a feeling that yours was like that.  Hugs!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-01-06 09:04 PM


Enjoyed this Paul..
Especially the second part!
Good write.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

wordwizard
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3 posted 2004-01-06 10:57 PM


Good write.One world is the real and the other ideal ....so that's how things were meant to be or did they 'become' that way...


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