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Learn Me!
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Learn Me! |
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alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
LEARN ME I don’t know why The dark skies fall over me Understated tears Fall from my mind LEARN ME! Though you can’t know The full story It’s a never-ending one Every page full But the daunting task of footsteps Mock my future chapters… Please tell me what you think. Thanks. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
do we ever really learn all there is about a person? No...thats the good part,,,If we knew all, there would be no adventure,,,,, good write Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...full of passion and a certain darkness that still leaves one with a glimmer of hope. Nicely done! Eric |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
alan, Really liked this...nice write Understated tears Fall from my mind Sadelite |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sounds as if you are writing about depression. Very much to the point, nice use of words, and an understated message. Dave |
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