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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-01-06 01:57 PM



The soul bares the burden of pain
                 tinkling strained echoes of refrain
As tears flow from emerald eyes
                 seeking visions in the skies
Light grows dim as weariness reigns
                 somehow, I'd seek home again.
In silence, heard, a broken heart sighs
                 and becomes echoes from on high.

This sorrow cloaks me, solitudes veil
                 for anguish is but a shade of pale,
Slowly stars fade into dawn’s hues
                 and here are tucked, thoughts of you.
I cry out, "God, for a moment, let peace prevail”
                 A broken whisper so assails
The sunlight’s sparkle on morning’s dew
                 and here are thoughts, tucked, of you.

I whisper your name, but can you hear
                 might an echo be naught but clear?
A voice calling gently on the wind
                 perchance, might love be found again?
Only blue heavens can see these tears
                 only Your eyes might see the fear,
Of this broken heart in weep again....
                 awaiting for a cleansing of all sins.


~*~

Thank you, Donna, for your most Gentle Spirit...



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
kayjay
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1 posted 2004-01-06 02:05 PM


Oh my, Karilea.  This touches chords that play for all of us who read your wondrous words.  You and Donna have found a lovely vehicle for a timeless plea for love.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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2 posted 2004-01-06 02:07 PM


Softly smiling at you...and Gentle Spirit.
Beautifully penned.

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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3 posted 2004-01-06 02:22 PM


Simply lovely.  Hugs to you both. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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4 posted 2004-01-06 02:38 PM





so good to read this from the you two, what a beautiful and soft write....
hugsssssx2


Lauren~

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

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5 posted 2004-01-06 03:14 PM


I just don't understand!??  I would have done a duet with you or Gnetle Spirit.  All you had to do was ask (and supply the kitties).

I love this poem nevertheless.

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6 posted 2004-01-06 04:24 PM


Simply beautiful.. well done Donna and Karilea

Maree.

"i can feel so unsexy for someone so beautiful, so unloved for someone so fine
i can feel so boring for someone so interesting, so ignorant for someo

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7 posted 2004-01-06 04:28 PM


Very beautiful, Donna and Karilea......
surely a
Hugs to you both,  :hugs  
Ethel

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8 posted 2004-01-06 06:57 PM


My thanks to all for the lovely replies
and especially to Karilea for the beauty of your words....again you have lifted my spirit to a place so very long forgotten...and so very much needing revisited...thank you....

Peace to all....

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9 posted 2004-01-06 10:35 PM


This is beautiful!!!!!
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10 posted 2004-01-06 10:49 PM


                might an echo be naught but clear?
A voice calling gently on the wind
                 perchance, might love be found again?
Only blue heavens can see these tears
                 only Your eyes might see the fear,
Of this broken heart

yes it may, if u seek it it is always there , it never left
beauitful duo, u 2

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11 posted 2004-01-07 10:39 AM


Again my thanks to each of you.  It is a joy to duet with Sunshine!  She definately knows how to make things bright!
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12 posted 2004-01-07 11:00 AM


Absolutely lovely.
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13 posted 2004-01-07 06:53 PM


Congrats you two for writing those beautiful words on pages blue.

Titia

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