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xaos Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 35 |
SOMETHING. Silver Strands of gossamer light The stars above the mist Whispered loving kiss Wanton depths of encompassing night Golden beams in rippling haze The heat of summer sun Turn as colors run Through the fine and careless days Ghostly mirror, pale as moon Reflected white light Tonight so jaded, slight Fading sooner, oh too soon Fiery spark amid the dark Flame of burning souls Old and unfilled holes Scarred and lifelong marked Never was, then was, remembered Poverty cannot be the same Pain once poor again Where once strength was lies now surrendered There was built the greatest wall Now is opened, shown Un-grown, safe once behind the stone Never considered it might fall |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I wandered through this in a slow and gentle read, that understood the parts and players well. Welcome to Passions.' ThisDiamond |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Xaos - The ABBA can be a tough read, but you carried it off very well. Your theme was consistent throughout. I realy enjoyed it. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
"There was built the greatest wall Now is opened, shown Un-grown, safe once behind the stone Never considered it might fall" we all have a wall we stand safe(hide?) behind,,,,,never expecting it to fall, or grow weak,,,,,,so surprised, when it is we ourselves,,that give admittance to its fall deep Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAOS~ 'Ghostly mirror, pale as moon Reflected white light Tonight so jaded, slight Fading sooner, oh too soon' Oh, so gently original~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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xaos Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 35 |
Thanks everyone  *hugs*I like 'ABBA' a lot, not sure why I used to use it obsessively but I have tried to use it less because it seemed everything was going that way. |
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