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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-01-05 08:39 PM



Write This Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~






~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-01-05 08:53 PM


I sometimes wonder if you write your poetry with a paint brush.  

I especially liked the stars in soft sigh,
and the clouds feathering by.  

So pretty~

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2 posted 2004-01-05 09:06 PM


Ah Marge...I should have known you would write of the January moon.
Love this one.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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3 posted 2004-01-06 01:57 AM


The moon sees me and I and the moon are one!

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4 posted 2004-01-06 05:40 AM


Dear Marge:  How beautiful!  Your moon poetry is in a class by itself!  

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2004-01-06 05:44 AM


Beautiful
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6 posted 2004-01-06 07:35 AM


Marge - What a great descriptive poem you've written here.  I can feel the chill and hear the wind as it pushes those clouds on by the moon.
Betty
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7 posted 2004-01-06 08:51 AM


This is so pretty.
Love ya,
Betty

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8 posted 2004-01-06 09:26 AM


You know, dear Marge, that this is totally after my heart!
Sigh, between you and the moon there is romance!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-01-06 09:30 AM


Marge,
You have painted the full moon,

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10 posted 2004-01-06 10:32 AM


your poetry and presentations are spectacular and engaging and I loved this - Paul
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11 posted 2004-01-06 11:54 AM


lovely quilling Marge!
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12 posted 2004-01-06 11:59 AM


do you have any idea how lovely/beautiful this was?  You are a wonder!  Thank you for writing and sharing.
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2004-01-26 12:36 PM


MyFriends~
How much it pleases me to share something as lovely as our moon-in-shine~

The perfect glowing ... of knowing she will come our way again~

We poets simply can continue to try to do her justice~
Can't get enough of her beauty~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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