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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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0 posted 2004-01-05 08:33 PM

DenyingDreams

I’ll never dream you again
never dream you
There’ll be no more waking
with your spirit swirling
through me like a velvet tide,
but not more pain
as silken water drags me
over yet another reef;
there’ll be no depths to pull me,
no sorrow of denying,
no joy

alan6501
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since 2004-01-03

Posts 89
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1 posted 2004-01-05 08:40 PM

All's I can say is WOW!!! This poem evoked emotions part way through it and I almost cried. I'm being completely honest. I know how to constructively criticize and there is absolutely no need for criticizing here. GREAT AND FANTASTIC POEM! By the way, there are not too many poems that bring me almost to tears!!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-01-05 08:43 PM

DearDearPoet~
I would tiptoe softly through your dreams with no need for deny~

This is *sighable*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2004-01-06 04:58 PM

Your vivid images are surpassed only by the poignancy... superb portrait of sinking into despair after dreams are shattered.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-06 05:02 PM

Very very nicely penned...as gentle as a sigh.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-01-06 08:03 PM

Jamie...Dreams are pretty persistent...if you can deny them through shear willpower, then you may be one of the few. I, for one, hope your dreams come true...this was entirely too sad!

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2004-01-07 09:12 AM

There are some dreams I don't WANT to come true -- they bite too hard. But yes, some I do, and I thank you for the wish.

~~J

Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

7 posted 2004-01-07 06:37 PM

Excellent write James. I like this write very well. Thanks for sharing.

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