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lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 93
Indiana

0 posted 2004-01-05 04:15 PM


(this is some of my older stuff. have pity on my soul)

Heart Songs

I’m running around in circles
Trying to chase your love
Breaking my heart into dust
I scramble to collect the pieces
I have to, I must
To put them back in their place
Where everything belongs
The way I felt
The way I loved
The way I cried
Before I was reminded of you
In every beat
And every word
In all the love songs…

“Oh I miss you baby come back into my arms
You’re the only one for me
I want to be with you until heaven
Oh baby why can’t you just see?”

…My heart beats like a poet
But my actions are too afraid to speak
My words are too distant to reach you
But my love you’ll always keep

I put myself together
And get back to my feet
I shake off the memories of you by my side
I won’t let my mind say
“When I’m with you I could die”
Inside I’m cold
But my heart’s intact
That’s the way it was before
But now I can’t go back


© Copyright 2004 steph - All Rights Reserved
wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
Posts 84
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2004-01-05 04:22 PM


Hang in there. I'm here for you always!
Keep on writing! Great write.

-katie-

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-05 04:24 PM


Do the rewrite if you have the time.

When I saw the title my heart sang.

Ruthlessly cut;  hit the inside of the message and sing it out.

It is there - make it happen.

Dave

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