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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-01-05 03:54 PM






~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2004 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-05 04:03 PM


Coming from the past
Growing with the knowledge I lost
Quicksand
To dance again

Liked it a lot

Dave

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2 posted 2004-01-05 04:05 PM


Dear Marge - If anybody else had said you were "shifty", I woulda argued with them.  This is a lovely poem.  I had a little trouble reading all the words, but that's just me.
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3 posted 2004-01-05 04:07 PM


Beautiful Margie girl..
and yes, true love is 'foreverly'.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Betty
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4 posted 2004-01-05 04:17 PM


This is so pretty Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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5 posted 2004-01-05 04:24 PM


very nice Marge - very nice indeed - Paul
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6 posted 2004-01-05 04:47 PM


Just a heartbeat away... yes! *S* I like this beauty very much, my friend. *S*
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7 posted 2004-01-05 04:49 PM


I really do like this. It seems like you don't limit yourself. that's always good. Keep at it.

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

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8 posted 2004-01-05 06:53 PM


A wonderful write Marge. You do such a great job in each of your works. Thank you.
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9 posted 2004-01-05 06:55 PM


A wonderful write Marge. You do such a great job in each of your works. Thank you.
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10 posted 2004-01-05 06:56 PM


Awe, come on MT....Marge, dear girl...you
always have to use such awesome pics, turning
that which is good into that which is great.

Another some day...ooops, you hate when I
use that word, don't ya?

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11 posted 2004-01-05 07:04 PM


enjoyed
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2004-01-05 07:53 PM


Had a LONG, PERSONALIZED 'thank you' to each one of you ... but the cyber-monster crunched it ~

Soooooooooooooooo, thankee one and ALL~

Magnus~
someday I'm gonna give you a real life *HUG*~

*Huglets* ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

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