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The Logic of Wind

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Greeneyes
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0 posted 01-05-2004 11:04 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


{The Ocean is beautiful at night:}

Stretched beyond sight in imagination
of shadows and sand --

I hold no regrets, until evening blends
my thoughts into a pattern of black,

I wish for colors of dusk,       in woven
fabrics, and orchestras of sound,
but the logic of wind    blows them silently apart,

Like fireflies   they remain untouchable

Sometimes:

a gentle mist       dances provocatively,
making waves jealous       of time forgotten,      

leaving traces along
an island of audience


Pavilions of light
embrace tidal    waters,          feeding
sand itís mellowing       color of life,


Where:

Falling from scattered        stars

A tender heart beats,               embraced in silent storms,
for a mindful soul

weeping still in


winter

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

© Copyright 2004 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-05-2004 11:13 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Goodness, Lauren, you are good!!
All of it is beautiful, but this part...

I wish for colors of dusk,       in woven
fabrics, and orchestras of sound,
but the logic of wind    blows them silently apart,

Like fireflies   they remain untouchable



This part is really breathtaking!  
Hugs, sweet lady  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-05-2004 11:14 AM).]

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Greeneyes
Just lovely, enjoyed.
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quote:
making waves jealous       of time forgotten
is too cool! i love this! as a whole it's a very nice piece.

oh - and the ocean is always beautiful.

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Oh yes....
I know this logic.

Thank you, Lauren!
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beautiful!
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Breathtaking Lauren...just amazing seeing and feeling through your eyes.
You have remarkable talent lady!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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GreenEyes~
My GAWD ... your writing is soooooooo awesome~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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enjoyed
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Your style is very captivating.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita
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Green Eyes I was initially going to quote part of your write: "I wish for colors of dusk, in woven fabrics, and orchestras of sound" but then as I read on I couldn't embrace or capture only part of it because the whole thing is beautiful. Thank you
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Very well done Lauren,  I too enjoy that
part of the sea, the shore,  the dwindle
of light until dark...such peace.
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Lauren,

This is absolutely breathtaking!

"I wish for colors of dusk,       in woven
fabrics, and orchestras of sound,
but the logic of wind    blows them silently apart"

Gosh that is beautiful! I'm in awe

Take care hon.
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

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I hold no regrets, until evening blends
my thoughts into a pattern of black,

I wish for colors of dusk,       in woven
fabrics, and orchestras of sound

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Goodness Lauren, it doesn't get any better than this!!

Love the peace and tranquility, and the way you make it dance in the wind.

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This is just soooo good - I loved it - paul
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A tender heart beats,               embraced in silent storms,
for a mindful soul

weeping still in


winter


Lauren..........{you already know} this whispers to me.....my heart and soul....


what a gift you give, what a treasure you truly are....


If the sun never rises
I want to go down in flames
I want the last thing I hear
is you whispering my name...
{Trace Adkins}
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Excellent in form and content...loud applause
________ice
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This exquisite piece could only have been written by our Greeneyes! Love it. Chris

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MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
makes a cold day warm
very good stuff
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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