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Without the Caramel
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Without the Caramel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Without the Caramel Peeled my memories one, by one wondering as, and the whys being sliced as I lay them patterned before me. The empty being filled with sweetened brown and floured oats, stirred and poured. All of you mixing into all of it. Scented heat, oven cured couldn't keep me away opening and closing and bit tasting until the bell went off and I told myself, it was time. Mitted the hot, wire cooled until hunger could wait no more. A bite of temptation, sensory release yet remembering another time when the caramel...kissed our lips. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I'm about speechless, I really really like this one. to be honest I like most of the stuff you write that I've read. And I love caramel. I only know myself...and even that I don't know well. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooh Perfect!! I love this Maureen. Putting into my library! hugs, Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A French Apple pie...this time  had no caramel in the house, but have caramel memories thank you teen poet *s And Chris, good morning ...have a taste?? Thanks Maureen [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-05-2004 10:24 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a friend of mine made me an apple with chocolate and nuts, no caramel...it was fantastic!  smile, you are loved |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Good lord, I don't even know what a French Apple pie is....can you get that in the freezer section? Someone invite me for dinner? and M? very nice..."if you won't let me fall for you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ Such a tasty write on all levels~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sounds delicious Dixie Susan, it's a one crust apple pie filled with apple crisp...not sure if you can find it in a freezer, but it's easy to make and tastes wonderful even the second day...only thing I am missing is vanilla ice cream to top it. You are invited for dinner anytime... Marge, tasty in sweetness and thoughts thanks dear one, hugs M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mmmmmmmm, sounds delicious, Maureen both the pie and the memories. Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a bitter sweet, lovely poem. Thanks for penning it. |
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