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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-06 11:29 PM


ChungKing Express Again

I watched this movie the other night.
This girl (woman) was after a man.
She was all over him, like a dog in heat.
Everytime he was eating in the food
court she would show up, and when
he wasn't home she would go to his
apartment and hang out and clean up.
I kept thinking to myself,
where is this girl, I want her.
I love women like her.
But then again, she doesn't want me.
She wants a man like him.
I should spend more time
studying his technique and less
time admiring her physique.

JamesLee
January06
2004

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McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
1 posted 2004-01-06 11:39 PM


Intuitive!  Easy to say, my friend, hard to do!  This is realistic and funny to me.

McLean

Ericc
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2 posted 2004-01-07 07:09 PM


Nicely done!

Eric

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
3 posted 2004-01-08 12:46 PM


LOL, James...you are somethin' else!  I'm thinkin' you watch too many darn movies!  But, your writes usually make me either cry or smile...that's an art!  Thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-08 01:40 AM


Isn't that just always the way it is!  I hope you find her!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-01-09 11:18 PM


Thank you McLean, Ericc, jaicie and iliana for the nice responses...
jaicie I think I have watched Chungking Express about ten times now...been enjoying Princess Blade lately...James

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