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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-04 11:19 PM

my guitar is playing music
it doesn't feel like my fingers are moving..
i'm so out of it right now
i needed to do something
be somewhere
but i don't remeber anymore
a brief conversation with you
and this is what happens to me
this is what i become
a blushing mess on the floor
what love can do to the best of us
oh..i said love...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2004-01-04 11:38 PM

"oh..i said love..."

Made that mistake myself...

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-05 01:04 AM

Another four letter word starting with an L and ending in this case with a T.

Nice to see that lovely sense of fun.

Dave

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

3 posted 2004-01-05 01:31 AM

what love can do to the best of us
oh..i said love...

lovely, no one can guess what love can do,its power is limitless.

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

4 posted 2004-01-05 01:51 AM

definetely

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

harash
Member

since 2003-12-27

Posts 99
India

5 posted 2004-01-05 01:58 AM

just nice....I said...love

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-05 02:04 AM

neat

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-01-05 12:17 PM

I can hear the music softly playing....beautiful

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-01-05 12:23 PM

exhale
Good one enjoyed the read.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-01-05 12:30 PM

It's beautiful when it's honest...

Lovely writing.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-01-05 12:33 PM

Lovely, honest and pure.
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

alan6501
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 89
PA

11 posted 2004-01-05 12:35 PM

Very simple but expresses so much.

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

12 posted 2004-01-05 03:25 PM

This is it. You have put into words that butterfly feeling...
thank you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2004-01-05 03:51 PM

Enjoyable, exhale.
Do it again!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

14 posted 2004-01-05 04:03 PM

Nicely done - Isn't it amazing how easily a person can be melted into incoherence?

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