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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-04 05:59 PM


So Far from Home

Heavenly Father,
I don't know
whats come over
me tonight.
I have a deep sadness,
remorse and unhappiness.
I feel all alone.

Please come to me
and comfort me.
Take me into your
arms and love me.
I don't want to feel
so far from home.

JamesLee
January03
2004


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EverRuss
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Indiana
1 posted 2004-01-04 06:14 PM


Such a great poem. Only lord knows how many times recently I have felt that way

Russell

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-01-04 06:34 PM


Amen...
Margherita
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3 posted 2004-01-04 06:57 PM


Amen to this prayer of longing, which shows your sensitive heart, dear James.
Love, Margherita

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
4 posted 2004-01-04 08:43 PM


Now you're just reading my mind, dear James...

:(

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

[This message has been edited by jaicie114 (01-04-2004 08:43 PM).]

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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-01-04 09:36 PM


Oh James. How well do I know this feeling?! A friend of mine once told me that in our darkest, most lonely moments.....He is there. He is always there.  Take heart dear poet. Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

marcel
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6 posted 2004-01-04 09:43 PM


Words so deeply formed from ones heart, do not go unheard........
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-01-05 03:42 AM


as long as you're here, you're not alone...you're with friends who love you...at least I've always felt that way
ambrish
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8 posted 2004-01-05 06:27 AM


I don't want to feel
so far from home.

     HE is always with you here.

Shlee
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since 2003-02-16
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9 posted 2004-01-05 08:07 PM


I know how you feel.  I've prayed very similar prayers so many times before.  Remember, he is always there and he always lets you know, even if you don't see it right away.  Don't give up.  He will give you comfort and provide for you   My prayers are with you.

~Shlee

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-01-06 03:08 AM


Thank you EverRuss, Enchantress, Margherita, jaicie, Nightshade, marcel, passing shadows, ambrish and shlee for your kind words...
There is no one that can comfort so well as the Heavenly Father and friends...James

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