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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-06 11:17 PM


My Feelings

You know, you sure
are sweet in the
middle of the night.
You make me feel
needed the way
you kiss me and
hold me tight.
And I need you too.
I think it would be
easy for me to fall
in love with you.
And if that's what
you want, just tell
me how you feel.
I'll go along with you.
My feelings I will reveal.

JamesLee
January06
2004

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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-01-07 07:57 AM


That's so typical masculine, dear James! First comes the night ... and then maybe love ...
Nonetheless, you sound so tender ... and she may well tell you what she wants!
Love, Margherita

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-01-07 09:10 AM


I've gotta agree with the comment above, exactly what I was thinking...but a lovely thought from a man's point of view...keep that pen flowing Mr.
ambrish
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3 posted 2004-01-07 09:16 AM


And if that's what
you want, just tell
me how you feel.
I'll go along with you.
My feelings I will reveal.
         nice one.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-01-07 09:55 AM


JamesMichael~
Greatly respecting these feelings~
An honest penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-01-07 11:07 PM


Thank you Margherita, Lee, ambrish and Marge for reading and commenting...James
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