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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2004-01-04 03:39 PM

How did it come to this?
What began with sweet delight,
such innocence and bliss
is now consumed by endless night.

What were the paths we took?
that led to this dark place
How was our love forsook -
replaced by horror on your face?

When did the sun not shine?
Upon our love so rich and fair
What happened that decline
became our deep despair?

Whose, was the fault that we
grew to what we are today?
Why could we never see
when love had gone away?

How did it come to this
and could we start anew?
Climb up from the abyss
to find our love is true.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-01-04 03:52 PM

We don't always know how things happen....hopefully we do know how to fix them. Nicely done.

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-01-04 03:58 PM

Sometimes love can be fixed and sometimes you just have to move on. Loved the poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2004-01-04 03:59 PM

sometimes,,,the fall is so gradual,,,that you are at the bottom looking up,,,before you know you even slipped...touching
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

4 posted 2004-01-04 04:24 PM

It is sad that love can't always be a gleeful moment, but I feel that sometimes the measurement of our past gives us the present moment to treasure. A wonderful write. Thank you.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2004-01-05 12:22 PM

How, indeed. *S* This is especially poignant to read after looking those questions in the face a few days ago... and having no answers... but that what was meant to be was finally being. *S* Excellent! *S*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-01-05 12:26 PM

Kethry
Wonderful read, enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-05 12:26 PM

a question I have asked many times...love the positive ending on this

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

8 posted 2004-01-05 01:40 PM

Yep...been there, asked it.

I enjoyed.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-01-05 02:54 PM

OhSweetKethry~
The poignancy of this just tears right through the reader~

LOVE YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

10 posted 2004-01-06 10:52 PM

Nice write on the subject of the endurance of love...still mixed up with love making by many...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-01-07 11:10 PM

I remember how it came to this for me...only one was trying and it didn't work out...unfortunately that one was me...and later when I wanted to try she told me it was too late....James

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

12 posted 2004-01-09 10:12 AM

Good write, Keth. A lot of us have asked these questions, though not as well.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

13 posted 2004-01-09 10:22 AM

One never knows which way change
will flow...
you captured that very well here, Kethry.
It's good to see you again!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

14 posted 2004-01-09 10:36 AM

Beloved one, now this is simply magnificent writing, the flow is perfect, without doubt your ability to reach into the reader and pull emotion from them is breathtakingly good. I swear I could feel the agony of a love that has died or at least has faded so far from the light that it will take a major resurrection.

Beautiful writing darling heart absolutely perfect, I love it utterly

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

15 posted 2004-01-09 10:42 AM

Kethry, your writing talents are awesome!!
You can write about any subject with perfection.
Thanks for sharing your work with us.

Hugs

Ethel

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

16 posted 2004-01-10 12:05 PM

***sigh***
This seems to linger in the back of all things good and bad. You penned it to perfection.

McLean

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