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wickedbeautifulpoetry
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0 posted 2004-01-04 03:22 PM


I want to absorb my past
Steep in it until I am strong and overbrewed
Slowly devouring each droplet second until the last
Until I might let go of the yesterdays in which I have stewed
I want to gulp up the bad times
Linger onto dainty sips of the good
Bring my yesteryear forward from its dried confines
Reflecting and reliving more than anyone should
For yesterday holds only promise of the tomorrow
That is indeed my today


© Copyright 2004 Katie - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-01-04 03:23 PM


wonderfully wicked poetry you have woven here...smiles and hugs, very much enjoyed!
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2004-01-04 04:01 PM


Awesome poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

lovejunkie
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3 posted 2004-01-04 05:12 PM


I hope this drink doesn't taste like the juice we had for breakfast. Keep on truckin'!

-Stephbert

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2004-01-05 09:32 AM



passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-01-05 12:48 PM


maybe it is like this, but maybe the past should be left there...for me anyhow...but it's hard
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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6 posted 2004-01-05 01:20 PM


And I want to save this writing...it is the past that we must see, and work through in order to become better people..that is what I have learned and you nailed it with this. Bravo!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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