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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-01-04 01:11 PM



Our every touch is a question asked by
the whispered stroke of
fingers.

There is patience found to the
repeated measure of our
asking.

Yet still the questions fall between
us as a silent wall of longing.

Tonight...will we step beyond the
confines of existence?

Will the promise of our fingers lead
to something more?

Tonight...will we seek to know the
limits of our senses?

Nothing waits for our awareness.

And your arms invite the subtle
death of my restraint.

Tonight...there is no need for
us to answer.

To simply ask -

This alone may be enough.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (01-04-2004 03:08 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2004-01-04 03:55 PM


This is a very beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-04 03:57 PM


so true, that the questions are better left unasnwered,,,,,let alone asked,,,very nice
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-01-04 03:58 PM


Beautiful Eric!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Goodknight
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4 posted 2004-01-04 04:37 PM


sensual poetry that leaves it to the read to be explicit - enjoyed the read - Paul
jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
5 posted 2004-01-04 04:41 PM


Eric...

Sometimes I truly do not have the words to express how your love songs affect my soul...so, simply thank you for all that you are and all that you share.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Patricia
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6 posted 2004-01-04 04:42 PM


Melting over here.  

Patricia

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-01-04 05:52 PM


Sensual...James
Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2004-01-04 07:14 PM


Eric, this is a masterpiece. Those questioning fingers reach far ...

Our senses will surface
from the secret labyrinth
where we confined them,
in fear of drowning
in the unlashed flood
of passion’s drive.
Mystery’s track keeps me
yearning tonight …
relax into my open arms,
we shall explore immensity
on waves of light …tonight.


You inspire.
I love you. Margherita

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
9 posted 2004-01-04 08:43 PM


Wow, this is breathlessly beautiful.
ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-01-04 09:33 PM


Wonderful.
TD

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In Your Poetic Mind
11 posted 2004-01-05 12:15 PM


To simply ask -
This alone may be enough''''


Sigh....you do inspire!  

~~**~~
This morning theres a calm I cant explain
By the time I recognize this moment it will be gone,  
I will bend light pretending it lingers on

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2004-01-05 12:28 PM


gorgeous piece!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
13 posted 2004-01-05 02:05 PM


~your words are intoxicating...

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Margherita
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Eternity
14 posted 2004-01-05 06:18 PM


Tonight ... had to read this one again, such a delight!
I love you. Margherita

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