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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2004-01-04 09:00 AM


I TRIED


On the table sits a lop sided cake
frosting i bought,,,,
you wouldn't live thru the one I made..
The streamers keep falling
The candles droop
have mercy! where is the icecream scoop!
sooooo thankful I didn't plan a surprise
It would have been a dismal failure....
im my eyes
I hold my breath as you blow the candles
watch you sneak a finger ful of icing,,,
you look at me,,,,,
a smile on your handsome face
a hug,,,a kiss
and the most wonderful words...
"thank you baby,,for remembering my birthday"




I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

[This message has been edited by Michelle_loves_Mike (01-04-2004 04:08 PM).]

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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark
1 posted 2004-01-04 09:37 AM


Smile

hehhehehe, Happy birthday

Smile

Jes


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2004-01-04 04:05 PM


This is so sweet. I know how it is to make a lopsided cake.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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