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mara marti
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since 2003-06-15
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Chicago, Illinois

0 posted 2004-01-03 10:22 PM



Hiding from what others know to be real
Crying at night people ask what's the deal?
Taking chances even though i'm afraid
Life is never fair it's all just a game

Hiding from the truth, lies stacking up
Continuing to fall, everything's so tough
Hollow walls and thin layers of blood
Frozen heart, I'm over, I'm done

Please save me before I take my life away
Cause I can't bare this
I can't take all this pain
and I'm sorry
I didn't want to break anyones heart
But I'm lonely
and broken apart.


© Copyright 2004 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
1 posted 2004-01-03 11:08 PM


Mara...

This is a beautiful and touching verse even though it is so very sad. You have a very nice style...welcome to Passions. I think you'll like it here.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-01-04 12:36 PM


Welcome to Passions, Mara Marti.
This is an excellent place to come for emoting. A sad write, yet broken hearts have been the theme of many, many poetic offerings since the beginning of poetry.
I hope you enjoy your stay here, and the variety of writings this site has to offer.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-04 04:57 AM


you are really not alone...there are plenty of us that know how this feels
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