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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-03 03:17 PM


Fleas coming off me
Ear flicking my coat
Earth's too dry
Doesn't smell
Back foot's waisted
Lamposts a problem
Saw the Shrink today

No, you haven't a problem
But everytime I pass a lampost Doc
I'm there for ever

Passionate with the postman's leg
Can't walk the street

Get up on the couch
Let's see what we can do
I'm not allowed there Doc

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wintertao
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1 posted 2004-01-03 05:24 PM


lol, creative fun pen, well done
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-03 06:12 PM


awww poor lil pup.. heh enjoyed Dave

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


DavePage
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3 posted 2004-01-03 06:33 PM


Thanks for your twisted senses of humour

Dave

gemjop
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4 posted 2004-01-03 07:10 PM


Passionate with the postman's leg
Can't walk the street

hehe. i like this, made me chuckle.

i'm from nottingham,england,  and my second name is Page. are we related? lol.

Startime55
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5 posted 2004-01-03 07:14 PM


This poem brought a smile and a giggle...Well done

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