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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-01-03 03:07 PM

Chaos reigns in most people's life
Sometimes chaos takes over
And life itself becomes
A total living hell

When chaos takes over
You hurt the people you love
And you care for

So do not let chaos
Reign in your life
For it is too soon
For it to be over

Cold hands means a warm heart

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-01-03 03:23 PM

Chaos reigns and rains
Merging fiction with fact
Stimulating adrenaline
Guesting history
Pressure or stress.

I like the words, the like the thoughs
I'm sorry you didn't take it's effects deeper.

Liked it

Dave

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

2 posted 2004-01-03 07:53 PM

I know too well the effects of chaos. It's entered and ruled my life, but it can't beat the true power inside me.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

3 posted 2004-01-04 04:29 PM

Hello Julie

Good write.I have taken uo the idea of writing a poem on Chaos, called Chaos or Order to describe some of my sentiments. Guess that in this world there ought to be a balance...

Martin

[This message has been edited by wordwizard (01-04-2004 04:31 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-01-04 04:32 PM

Thank you for your replies. And Martin I shall read the poem you speak of once it is written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-01-18 11:52 PM

(big angel hugs) Ever too often does the shame and agony get under ones fingernails and lets the cancer overwhelm them, dearest friend, the true remedy is to smile and soon enough all will be calm again! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true comfort to all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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