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Margherita
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0 posted 2004-01-03 07:56 AM



     
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I am the rose petal
you choose to caress
with your tears of love.
Your shiny drops of dew
glide over my curves
and play my every chord.
The sound of passion rises
from my very deepest core,
life holds its breath in awe.
Aaahhhhhh …
the tune of Love expands
to mingle in divine rapture
with creation’s echo
and to open heaven’s gates.
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[This message has been edited by Margherita (01-03-2004 09:39 AM).]

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Patricia
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1 posted 2004-01-03 08:43 AM


Simply breathtaking, Margherita.  

Patricia

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2004-01-03 08:47 AM


and very sensual too
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-01-03 09:39 AM


Margherita,
You describe it well. Enjoyed

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-01-03 10:33 AM


Margherita, what a lovely write this is...
just beautiful.  
Hugs  
Ethel

jaicie114
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5 posted 2004-01-03 11:46 AM


Margherita...

The magic and wonder of this piece is simply astounding. Thank you so much for sharing such passion with us.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-01-03 02:10 PM


stunningly beautiful
Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-01-03 03:14 PM


yes, very sensual Margherita

"I can't believe
I've lost the very best of me"

Natalie Merchant


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-01-04 05:49 PM


Lovely...James
Margherita
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9 posted 2004-01-04 07:01 PM


Thank you all for appreciating .....
Aaaahhhhhh is a magical sound and springs from spirit divine.... and divine is the connection we establish in such moments of deep awareness.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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10 posted 2004-01-05 12:42 PM


Imagery painting a picture of sensual desire

I can just about remember those days.

Loved it

Dave

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11 posted 2004-01-05 02:29 PM


Margherita~
This is a delicately lovely as can be~
BEAUTIFULLY DONE~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-01-05 02:34 PM


I ditto just about everything everyone else has already said...

The words were beautiful and so is the picture..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

BluesSerenade
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13 posted 2004-01-05 08:33 PM


Margherita, this purrrrs.
Loved the picture, but I loved your poem more!!


Margherita
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14 posted 2004-01-06 09:18 AM


Thank you dear ones.
Love and Light ... and divine passion to all of you.
Margherita

Ericc
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15 posted 2004-01-07 07:12 PM


And you...the gate keeper.
One who knows.

Love,
Eric

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