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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-03 07:27 AM



The Forecast

I want to be the love song
that plays within your mind.
Its words touching you from this distance,
giving purpose to each wake of day
to canvas the loneliness
and paint it with possibilities
and dimensions of "we"

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-01-03 07:59 AM


Maureen, this is a wonderful intention, may this song manifest. Your forecast is the first step to the oneness you desire.
Beautiful write!

Love, Margherita

Patricia
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2 posted 2004-01-03 08:36 AM


What a wonderful thought you have expressed beautifully.  

Patricia

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-01-03 08:37 AM


that plays within your mind.......
sweet may the tune be to remind of you always

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-03 02:19 PM


sweet!
VAS
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5 posted 2004-01-03 02:43 PM


beautiful, especially those first two lines!!!

*BRAVO*

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Magnus
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6 posted 2004-01-03 03:32 PM


A very positive and hopeful yearning M.  May
it be as you wish.  

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2004-01-03 09:06 PM


much said within a few words
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