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lovejunkie
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since 2003-12-31
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0 posted 2004-01-02 03:40 PM



Fix Me

If you want my heart take it
It’s broken
But I promise it’ll work for you

God it hurts without you
The pain
It lulls me to sleep at night

It only gets better when I’m next to you
Those Kisses
They never lost their touch

Make it be a good day
Your eyes
That blue’s all I want to see

Give me the sky
The world
All wrapped up inside of you

I’m not asking to be the one
My love
Just another day pretending

© Copyright 2004 steph - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-02 04:16 PM


steph, this one aches. I hope that it's
not from personal experience.
Hugs  
Ethel

chrissydome
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since 2003-11-28
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germany
2 posted 2004-01-02 04:49 PM


i know how that feels! hugs!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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3 posted 2004-01-02 05:04 PM


Ouch! This is painful...some things cannot be fixed and it's better to throw them away than to keep cutting yourself on the jagged edges.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-03 03:08 PM


yeah, I know this
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
5 posted 2004-01-03 03:55 PM


the closing line
just kicked my a$$

love when that happens.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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