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Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

0 posted 2004-01-02 01:11 PM

It's raining, it's pouring,
or so the saying goes,
Who even knows who said that,
but it was said,
and whoever it was had the right idea in their head,
on days like this it's best to spend
the whole damn day in bed.
But not alone, oh no my dear,
with company in deed,
you don't have to do that much,
I'd surely take the lead.
My urges fight to be freed,
it's past a want, I'd say it's a need.
Yes, that's what I'd say...feed this fire.
It's raining, the windows are fogging,
folks are egg nogging, women are nagging,
some are shagging, idiots are jogging.
But I'd rather be hogging your covers,
Cause who knows who said it,
but I'm glad it was said,
Rainy days are best spent,
in the confines of a bed.

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2004-01-02 03:17 PM

I most definitely agree! Truthfully written piece, I enjoyed its rawness.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2004-01-02 03:35 PM

Great Terrina,
I like your wit and honesty! I'm glad you pointed this one out to me! I appreciate your doing that and pointing out this clever piece. (I used to spend hours on the internet, but have to narrow that time down, and in doing so, I miss lots of good stuff. (Remind me occasionally)
Sadelite

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2004-01-02 04:21 PM

amen to that

this is good.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

chrissydome
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 73
germany

4 posted 2004-01-02 04:55 PM

how true and how beautiful! :-)

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2004-01-02 05:00 PM

Yes, it's good to spend rainy days in bed but unfortunately these days my only hope of romance is through a good book. Interesting piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-03 03:11 PM

yep

Terrina
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 166
California

7 posted 2004-01-05 03:06 PM

Thank you all so much for your comments.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-01-05 08:02 PM

Terrina,
   First, I'd like to thank you for your response to my last poem.  I looked quickly for another of yours, but wasn't able to find one I hadn't responded to.  Have you written anymore?   I'm looking forward to reading yours.   BTW, check back at "to Change the SHAPE of RAIN";  I left a note for you there.
   This one was fun to re-read!  hehehehe
                    Sadelite

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-01-06 11:21 PM

Wonderful thoughts...James

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