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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-01-02 11:15 AM



Flowing Inside My Dream

Catch my dreams in flight
To meet much the same
Where a love light shines
As I whispered your name

Pursuing love tenderness
In touch , taste sensations
Sense whispered longing
Follow dream destinations

Inviting pillow talk passion
Kiss where offerings flow
In granting your every wish
Loving pleasures I bestow

Trace along soft silky satin
Into rapturous new heights
Flowing inside my dreams
Inside those liquid delights


Hope ©2003

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2004-01-02 11:17 AM


Love this...bravo! An excellent piece of writing this morning.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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2 posted 2004-01-02 11:30 AM


nice to see you this way
HopeS
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3 posted 2004-01-02 11:45 AM


Hey thank you EvocativeVerse2
so pleased you enjoyed

Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2004-01-02 11:46 AM


Hey thanks dixie , yes its amazing what thoughts can do
Hope

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5 posted 2004-01-02 12:37 PM


Oh dear Hope,  that's a nice flutter dance
and a pretty dreamy dream you're having.

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-01-02 12:45 PM


thank you Bluesy , they were my first dreamy thoughts of two thousand and four , I do hope there will be  more

Hope

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7 posted 2004-01-02 12:58 PM


This is beautiful, Hope.
And, congratulations on your
"Poem Of The Week" at the other site.  
Hugs  
Ethel

HopeS
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8 posted 2004-01-02 10:40 PM


Thank you Ethel for your kind reply , hey I did not know about the poem being POTW until your told me

Hope

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9 posted 2004-01-02 11:44 PM


Well, I started not to mention it. Now, I'm
glad that I did!!  
Hugs, sweet lady
Ethel

HopeS
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10 posted 2004-01-02 11:53 PM


Thanks again Ethel , yes it must be a poetry site that does not let the poet know by email , hey how were you able to bump me back up here LOL
Hope

iliana
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11 posted 2004-01-02 11:55 PM


oooOOOOHHHHhhh!  Hope, this is about as close as I can read to X-rated!  Really lovely!
EverRuss
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12 posted 2004-01-03 12:00 PM


Absolutly beautiful hope..I feel you're pain and you're in my thoughts and prayers. I just recently part from someone who i spent the most romantic week with. I really dunno what to do...this sounds weird lol but hope what would you do (taking advice from my elders)

Russell

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13 posted 2004-01-03 02:08 AM


Well your muse certainly is bringing in the New Year in style, lovely Hope, and Happy New Year!

A Very Happy New Year To You and Yours!                    
Let there be peace on earth

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14 posted 2004-01-03 08:48 PM


Senually beautiful, Hope...your dream flows with passion...I love it...

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