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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2004-01-02 05:23 AM



Trust Me

Trust what is trust?
You give him your heart, mind, and soul;
he gives you his hand and he says,
“Trust me.”
You walk through fire and feel no pain,
because he has given his hand and says,
“Trust me.”
As you stand and watch all kinds of misdeeds,
he turns to you and says,
“Trust me.”
Then one day you realize he is not worth
the trust you have given him.
You no longer believe when he says,
Hold my hand-
“Trust me.”
Then, one day another comes along and he puts out
his hand and says,
“Trust me.”
Then the cycle begins again when he says,
Hold my hand-
“Trust me.”

Love Bon-Bon


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-02 06:00 AM


Bon-Bon, what's so good about it is that
the next one who says "trust me" could
really be the one who can be trusted??
A good write, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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2 posted 2004-01-02 11:49 AM


you write about what I am going through and have been going through for years
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3 posted 2004-01-02 11:53 AM


Bonnie~
You write with beauty and wisdom~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

Terrina
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 166
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4 posted 2004-01-02 02:24 PM


You know, TRUST...that is a crazy thing.
We all want it, and we don't want to give it.

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