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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2004-01-01 02:10 PM



Constant Reminder

The pain you caused me for so long,,,,
no one should bear,,,
Still, your words ring daily in my ears,,,
you can't let go and move on,,,
The mistakes were made,,,
guilty on both sides,,,,
The trials of the past,,are not left to be..
contstantly,,,the ways of days old
are rehashed and relived,,
I want the pain to stop,,,,to ease
I'm past the point of asking nicely,,,
no more please,,,
Get on with your life,,,the future awaits,,,
you'll get no more pleasure from my pain,,
My world has moved on,,,you're no longer a part,,,,
still you circle,,,stabbing words to the heart,,
Listen close,,,,for once,,if never again,,,
the power you once held,,with words of doubt
,,,words of hate and rage,,,,
I know,,they were all about you,,,,
so shallow and bare..
All the nonsense , all the hurt,,,all those ways to make me cry,,
of your constant reminders,,,,,
I no longer care

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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1 posted 2004-01-01 02:17 PM


OUCH!!!!!

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

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2 posted 2004-01-01 06:20 PM


Can there be peace.

The quality of writing could it be freelanced to life.

Dave

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3 posted 2004-01-01 06:29 PM


Michelle, some people just don't know when it's
too late, do they? They don't want to let go.
Hugs to you,
Ethel

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4 posted 2004-01-01 06:43 PM


Ouch here too!

Hang in there me friend. Someone like that is not only not wanted but not needed either...


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5 posted 2004-01-02 03:31 AM


sending hugs
Michelle_loves_Mike
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6 posted 2004-01-05 07:53 PM


as Ringo well knows,,this one was "inspired" by my ex.......thank you all for your kind words
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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7 posted 2004-01-05 08:31 PM


You should show this Ringo guy this poem. Maybe then he'd get the point!

Anyway, good poem.

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8 posted 2004-01-06 02:59 PM


Alan dear
Ringo is my best friend,,,not my ex,
He knows my ex,,,and where these feelings come from,,,,,
thank you for your reply
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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