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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-01-01 06:29 AM



trust
the fingers beckoning
curling hitherhere
i need
granite
underneath belief
white blood blithering
protest
the dates are but the chiseling
no one's life is lived this smooth
feel the indent
ridiculed
as palms heavy push the grief
not a thing you learn in school--
just how heavy does death weigh?

damn you, damn you, anyway

why did you leave me so soon?

© Copyright 2004 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2004-01-01 06:34 AM



Karen?...

Love you, sis

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germany
2 posted 2004-01-01 07:41 AM


so touching! thank you!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-01-01 07:43 AM


serenity,
I know it's not the same but we love ya.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-01-01 08:01 AM



Hey, K?


Now...let's write!

Kaoru
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5 posted 2004-01-01 08:13 AM


Just amazing, and powerful writing, Miss S.

I'm in awe.

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-01-01 09:07 AM



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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-01-01 10:26 AM


Dear Karen....  

icebox
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8 posted 2004-01-01 11:21 AM


It is always too soon to be left behind.

There is no magic for this that I have ever found except that which softens anger.

The new year can bring many things; I hope it rest gently on your shoulders.

EvocativeVerse2
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9 posted 2004-01-01 11:29 AM


Hi Serenity...wow. This is quite the piece. Very strong, powerful, images. Well done dear friend.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

vandana
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10 posted 2004-01-01 11:51 AM


enjoyed
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2004-01-01 12:19 PM


Karen?


garysgirl
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12 posted 2004-01-01 12:40 PM


Karen, we love you, sweetie......
       
Ethel

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13 posted 2004-01-01 01:46 PM


could be said of the year, no?
nevermore . . .
but the new is born
of promises

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