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Open Poetry #30

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-12-31 07:21 PM

Tapers the echo, on a frivolous wind
Moving through inner caverns, and imparts orchid pinned
Debutante through the colors in the changes be fall
Into winter white dresses, babbled light to her call

Flow…but a vision, carried selflessly true
As a sponge soaking highlights of the red sunsets hue
In the chatter of changes made determined or not
That the toast to high standard never fault or forgot

Snug in love’s dissertation will inspire again
Fanning flames from the ashes on a frivolous wind
Turning ear to discover what a whisper speaks clear
Into winter white dresses, trace reminders so dear

Copyright Kkh 12/31/03

Happy New Year My Friends!
Be Safe.
TD

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (12-31-2003 07:22 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-12-31 09:04 PM

Thanx K.  for all of your beautifully
crafted,  well written poetry over the
past year.  Thanx for the kindness of
your duets and the ever present wit and
humor of 147...

P.S.  Next Year...(tomorrow)...howse abouts
youse passes the popuhcorn dissa way,  huh?

Happy New Year my dear friend....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-12-31 09:17 PM

Kathleen, this is a beautful poem as all of yours are.
Thank you for gifting us with your beautiful and
elegant writing over this year.
With love and hugs,

Graphic By Twisted
Artistic Stylings Of Twisted Serenity

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-12-31 11:05 PM

Dang, wish I'd written this one.

"Fanning flames from the ashes on a frivolous wind
Turning ear to discover what a whisper speaks clear"

Nice...very, very nice. I'm keeping this one.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-01 04:13 AM

And, happy new year to you, too! Enjoyed very much!

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2004-01-01 08:28 AM

im dieing for a toast!!! special glasses are a must

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