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EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2003-12-31 12:05 PM



I've been having that dream
Missing your face
Feeling again
Like a mental case
I dont know what to do
I dont know who to be
When I see you out
I fall apart
In need again and It breaks me heart
I dont know what to do
I dont know who to be
I long to say She and me

On the contrary
Wont you take me in
Wont you take me home
Wont you make me one of your own
Will you need me
Will you love me You dont have to be all alone

Ive been up all night
thinkin you
Ive been losing sight
over you
I dont know what to do
I dont know who to be
Dont you leave
With unspoken words
Dont make me bleed
A broken heart I dont know how to cry
I dont know how to say
I Swear! I long to be She and me


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-12-31 12:39 PM


ouch...this aches
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2 posted 2003-12-31 01:02 PM


Russell, I do like your poems. This one
sounds like a song. Is it lyrics to one?
If not, I'll bet it could be.
Hugs,

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2003-12-31 02:11 PM


oh... what a lovely poem.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
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4 posted 2003-12-31 03:39 PM


Your style is very unique...
The power of the emotions comes through very well.

Communication of the heart is not always an easy path. Hang in there.
ThisDiamond

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