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chrissydome
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germany

0 posted 2003-12-31 10:02 AM


there's something on my mind that won't come out
there's something in my heart that wants to shout
i'm crying tears for noone to see
i'm out here on my own, but cannot be free


my sticky hands are groping for a smile
my bloody feet won't find rest for a while
i'm crying tears too bitter to taste
i'm out here on my own, my life to waste


so let go of me now, even if you don't understand,
let go of me now, i've tried hard, but i can't
don't ask exhausting questions, i can't answer them now
i really tried my best, but we can't make it anyhow

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Terrina
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2 posted 2004-01-02 02:37 PM


This is good.
You sound sad. I'm glad that writing gives you an outlet. Focus on something today that brings a smile to your lips and then tell me all about it!

chrissydome
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germany
3 posted 2004-01-02 02:38 PM


MUSIC!!! couldn't live without it! :-)

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Terrina
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4 posted 2004-01-02 02:39 PM


Write me a poem about it. Make me smile too;-)
chrissydome
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germany
5 posted 2004-01-02 04:50 PM


sitting on the floor
tired and cold
tears full of pain
suffocating rain

whisper from above
this must be love
no, it's the tune inside of me
that just set me free

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

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6 posted 2004-01-03 03:11 PM


sad either way I guess
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