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DavePage
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0 posted 2003-12-30 07:07 PM


If you could toss a pebble
Would it hit the shore
If you could throw a penny
From your knees into the sea
Would your feet be wet
Would the string draw free
Would the net of thousands
Close on them as you walk
Would their lives be cristened
By your very walk
Would your thoughts for others
Be treated as weakness
Would you care for people
Be regarded as finese
People dont care for others
We just cant take anymore
And we dont give me ears
We give them the door
So should we toss a pebble
From our knees into the sea
And look at those around us
The ones we cannot see.

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-12-31 10:05 AM


Goodmorning, Dave,  
I enjoyed this poem.
Back to the top....
Hugs,  
Ethel

wintertao
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2 posted 2004-01-29 09:40 PM


enjoyed mucho mas )
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-30 01:24 PM


wow....inspiring
Grover
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4 posted 2004-01-30 03:12 PM


Very nice. Grover.
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