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Open Poetry #30
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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-12-30 06:03 PM



the moon falls into the sun
as clouds choke stars above
and night tears fall to grounds
painting skies of tomorrow

© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2003-12-30 06:16 PM


very nice
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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2 posted 2003-12-31 01:15 AM


Sunset to a blooded conclusion

Please write more of this.

Dave

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-12-31 03:49 AM


I saw this, very clearly
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