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Catching Butterflies
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Catching Butterflies |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{The music of your heart pulls water from my eyes} tracing butterfly wings along a path that only you traveled I awake and touch-- count the raindrops breathe you in-- Wearing illusions of water reflecting that helpless moon still hanging I stand a l o n e as tides recede from shores laying new stones from the ocean's mind I touched you-- before I knew-- I read your words-- became real whisper upon my ears, from your lips {once more} life after rain {Reposted by 'special request'} ~~**~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
though I didn't request it... it's lovely, Lauren. Have a Happy and safe New Year M |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
The poets are speaking to me today with such wisdom. Greeneyes, I heard your message loud and clear and have taken it to my heart, using your wisdom as a shield. I don't know if I make any sense to you...but, my dear lady, you made all the sense in the world to me. A perfect write at a perfect time. Patricia |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I thank whomever made the request.. lovely my friend just lovely.. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I wish I had been the one who made the request...but glad to whoever did nonetheless...beautiful lauren, absolutely beautiful, as always your words are just lovely! Take care hon. Happy New Year to you, Amy  "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, A lovely write and Happy New Year. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ A LOVELY, LOVELY write~ Happy New Year my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
very touching,,,,you can almost feel the butterfly wings touching your heart happy new year Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so lyrical! Great poem! Eric |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
so lovely...Very touching, I am glad I choose to read this it brought me a quiet peace within reading your words. Beautifully done. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You never fail to take my breath away Lauren. Lovely lady...just like you! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Very lovely poetry - just great - paul |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The music of your heart pulls water from my eyes} That sets the tone, perfectly! Beautiful rain, Lauren~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing it. |
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