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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2003-12-30 11:53 AM



We've all said it
"I'd give anything...if..."
Never thinking,,,we may be called on it...
If the time came,,,to help another,,,,
would you?,,,
turn your back, even on your brother?
If you had the time to spend,,,
should you?,,,,,
Words tossed so easily,,,,
So sure they fall on deaf ears...
When my father passed,,,I said those words...
wishing he could hear,,,
In my heart I wished,,,,but
In my mind I knew,,,
if I'd have given the time,,,
before,,,,
What would I give?
To see him one more time? Hear a joke,,,
smell his cigar ,,,
easily..I say anything if,,,,
I would,,,,,
the should,,,,,,is
I missed it when it was there....

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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1 posted 2003-12-30 12:37 PM




this hurts

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2 posted 2003-12-30 02:53 PM


Michelle, my dear, you know my thoughts, and my feelings about this subject. This is truly an oustanding testiment to the love you had.
*hugs*

Cause in my dreams it's always there
The evil face that twists my mind
And brings me to despair.

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-12-30 06:27 PM


dixie u said it, it does hurt
Snowflake From Hell
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4 posted 2003-12-30 11:01 PM


ahh yes indeed its quite hurtful

RE-FUSE-TO COMPLY WE'RE TRYIN TO DO THIS OUR OWN WAY and now I'm watchin the fallen stars surroundin me 15 minutes of fame -SKINLAB-

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5 posted 2003-12-30 11:34 PM


I said to my brother "one day you will arrive here and not want anything".

It was 6 years before be asked again.

People are people not relations.

We all help but no-one has the right to live off someone else for ever, or treat them as a sponge.

We'll all help family as and when we can.

Dave

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