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exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-12-30 01:59 AM

you'll never let me feel the way i want to feel
i want the streetlights to show
who i really am,
with their harsh lights
shinning down on us
judging us
i'm not the one with something to say,
its already been laid out for you
my heart
my soul
but you still can't hear me
screaming your name
screaming
my love could burn a hole through you
thats why your scared of me...thats why.
..i'll never hear you say i'm beautiful...will i...

"Hello my name is..Distance.."

[This message has been edited by exhale (12-30-2003 02:00 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-12-30 02:30 AM

ouch

heart hugs to you

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2003-12-30 02:44 AM

Postive thinking sure brings about positive actions, and I hope you don't have to scream to be heard, if you do, I have to wonder if it is worth it? Great write of an all too common scenario.

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-12-30 04:31 AM

the shout of a whisper,,,brings attention to you more easily,,,,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-01-01 03:29 AM

awesome write........BEEEEwell and Happy 2004!

chrissydome
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 73
germany

5 posted 2004-01-01 07:47 AM

happy new year! keep writing poetry like this one! i's amazing!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-01-01 07:53 AM

exhale,
Sounds like you hit the nail on the head.
Good write.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-01-01 10:12 AM

There is great power in this universal write.
The embrace of the feeling conveyed here was vivid, and clear.
Love and luck to you.
ThisDiamond

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