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To my love

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Juju
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In your dreams


0 posted 12-29-2003 11:47 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju


To my Love
4/7/03

You are perfect in every way,
how you move through life each day.
like a saint with wings,
but your judgement stings.
your one flaw:
is the hurt you cause me.
it's the reason we could never be.

With Complete Sincerly,
Juju the poet.
© Copyright 2003 Juju - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 12-30-2003 12:02 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed reading your
first post. It sounds like it's from your heart.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting
from all of us here at PIP.
Hugs,
Ethel/garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 12-30-2003 12:19 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Welcome Juju!

Lovely debut...

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

iliana
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3 posted 12-30-2003 12:54 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

So much contrast in so few words -- enjoyed!
passing shadows
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displaced


4 posted 12-30-2003 03:14 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh believe me...I can relate

Welcome to Passions!
Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 12-30-2003 04:29 AM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

sad how perfection,,,is so easily marred by reality,,,
welcome to pip talk
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

huddersfield
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6 posted 12-30-2003 05:34 AM       View Profile for huddersfield   Email huddersfield   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for huddersfield

As a fellow new member, let me wish you welcome..

Nice poem...i can relate to what is said there...

hope to read some more of your writing soon
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 12-30-2003 07:11 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


How easily an action
can push someone away...
Well done!
Welcome to Passions, Juju!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

ambrish
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8 posted 12-30-2003 08:03 AM       View Profile for ambrish   Email ambrish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ambrish's Home Page   View IP for ambrish

welcome here....
    is the hurt you cause me.
it's the reason we could never be.

        so sad.
LngJhnAg
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9 posted 12-30-2003 08:26 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

This poem touches a lot of people Juju.  Well written.

Welcome to the poetry boards.  As the official Greeter, it is my job to warn you of scalawags and rascals.  The two who best fit this description are Balladeer and Toerag (you should read their excellent poetry, but don't fall for their silver-tongued ways).  You must never trust them with your most intimate secrets.  Only trust me, who will share them only with a few people, and maybe in a couple of poems, and perhaps in a few responses to other poems, and only in one or two newspapers; but, NEVER with everybody else.
Aimster
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10 posted 12-30-2003 09:03 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Juju,

Welcome to Passions!!! This is a
wonderful first post, with so much said
in so little words. A lot of people will
benefit from reading this...Enjoy your
stay here and I look forward to reading
more of your work.
Take care,
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


11 posted 12-30-2003 09:12 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

darkatnoon
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12 posted 12-30-2003 10:27 AM       View Profile for darkatnoon   Email darkatnoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for darkatnoon

why 4/07/03?
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~


13 posted 12-30-2003 11:31 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

Wow..did I ever feel this. I know of what you speak...it's so unfair all the criticism without them even bothering to get to know you. Sorry you have had to feel this. It's VERY painful when people WON'T communicate with you. I know. Sending a hug.
Terri~
Juju
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In your dreams


14 posted 12-30-2003 01:50 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Thank you for replying to my poetry.
Why did I have that date? simple that is when I wrote it.

(c;Juju
darkatnoon
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15 posted 12-30-2003 02:36 PM       View Profile for darkatnoon   Email darkatnoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for darkatnoon

was it worth?
Juju
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16 posted 12-30-2003 06:56 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

worth what??????
Marge Tindal
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17 posted 12-30-2003 08:14 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JuJu~
Welcome to Passions ...~

Anytime is a good time for a penning~
And any memory is 'worth' it's weight in words~

Happy New Year's wishes to you and yours~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
         noles1@totcon.com

scorpio
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right...there


18 posted 12-30-2003 08:52 PM       View Profile for scorpio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for scorpio

I enjoyed your first post.  Welcome to Passions.

believe in what your heart feels...

lovejunkie
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since 12-31-2003
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19 posted 12-31-2003 02:24 AM       View Profile for lovejunkie   Email lovejunkie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lovejunkie

at risk of sounding dumb, amen. This was really good and it proves you dont need a lot of words to say something meaningful.

-Steph
Suetang
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20 posted 12-31-2003 04:05 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Welcome to Passions Juju and thank you for sharing your heart with us.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

EverRuss
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21 posted 12-31-2003 04:54 PM       View Profile for EverRuss   Email EverRuss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EverRuss

Great poem. Really sums up a lot of emotion in a few words

Russell

Terrina
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22 posted 12-31-2003 05:36 PM       View Profile for Terrina   Email Terrina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terrina

Wow, isn't that the problem we all have. Judgement.
Juju
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In your dreams


23 posted 12-31-2003 06:34 PM       View Profile for Juju   Email Juju   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Juju's Home Page   View IP for Juju

Well... falling in love can be good, but I try to use my head. I can't say it wasn't or was, because love kinda happens by accident. Something learned. Sad enuff I still like him. He is a nice guy. He just thinks he is better morally than me. Little than he knows I am alot better with the hole moral thing then him. I find it amusing. It's kinda Ironic. heheheheh.
Thats basicaly why I think he looks at me like that..

Juju
JamesMichael
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24 posted 12-31-2003 06:48 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
 
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